Quintus Borocus

Mr. Smithers’ Marvelous Multicolor Revolution Another Monday morning had fallen and New York was gray. The clouds were gray. The buildings were gray. The man walking down the street was ...

This is a very moving piece and quite well written. There are some confusing parts with the connections between different analogies; places where things don't seem to fit together. From ...

I am quite impressed by this piece of work. The writing is very good, and your idea's absolutely fascinating. There were a couple of spots where I was a little ...